Your manager has asked you to arrange a party for a colleague leaving the company. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter suggest a suitable date and time for the party recommend a venue propose the food and entertainment options that should be available.

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Respected sir, I hope you are doing well. I am writing

this

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letter to suggest

you

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to you

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Correct article usage

the

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best time and date for Vasanth's retirement party. I would like you to consider

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apply

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Wednesday 9th

march

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March

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at 6 PM because it's

holiday

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a holiday

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. I celebrated my son's birthday at 'Kala

Hall

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' which is

equiped

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equipped

with

centralised

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a centralised

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air conditioner and

spacious

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a spacious

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hall

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. I would like to recommend

this

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for our party.

Moreover

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, it is

nearby

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near

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to our office and convenient for transportation. The best part is the beverages are free if we book the

hall

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for more than 6 hours. Please consider both vegetarian and non-vegetarian options since most of our employees are vegetarians. The party

hall

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will arrange the menu

depends

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depending

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on our food selection.

In addition

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, western

daners

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dancers

are available and we can use them for entertainment after the cake cutting ceremony. I would strongly suggest

this

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hall

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and hope you will enjoy it Yours faithfully Santhoshkumar

ksanthosh701Wed Feb 12 2025

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coherence and cohesion

Ensure paragraphs are more focused on single ideas to improve clarity.

task achievement

Consider rephrasing for more formal language in some sections.

coherence and cohesion

The letter is structured with a clear greeting and closing, which is commendable.

task achievement

You have suggested a suitable date and time along with a recommended venue, which fulfills the task requirements.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

156 words

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Art classes, such as painting and drawing, are as important as other subjects to a child’s development, and they should be compulsory in high school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that companies should provide employees with exercise time during the day. What is your opinion about this?

In many societies, there is a growing emphasis on sustainable living and reducing environmental impact. What are the challenges of adopting a sustainable lifestyle? What practical actions can individual make to contribute to sustainability?

Films and computers games containing violence are popular. Some people say they have negative effect on society and should be banned. Others say they are just harmless relaxation. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why this is the case? What can be done about this p