The charts below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart provides information about the utility of exports in various groups from 2015 to 2016 in a country. The data shows the comparison of each category yearly.

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, the value in 2016 was higher than in 2015 in the most of classifications, except in agricultural products. In the agricultural sector, the price in 2016 was a little bigger than in 2015, but the difference was not significant.

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the data, if we compared the goods one by one every year, the analogy of each commodity was not substantial. It was about under 10 billion per item.

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, petroleum and engineering were the two highest outputs in export costs among the five commodities during the periods. They were almost 60 to over 60.

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, the three other products,

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as gems and jewellery, agricultural, and textiles have the same average numbers. The totals were under 50, but nothing was under 20.

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, the lowest count of exports was textiles in 2015.

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