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The line graph and pie chart below show information on crime in the UK for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line graph and pie chart illustrate data on the criminal situation in the United Kingdom in the
last
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 year. Numbers are given in tens thousands and percent.
Overall
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, the youth has committed a significant portion of
crimes
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 in the UK.
Whereas
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, the most common type of misconduct is related to violence.
According to
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 the information given in the line graph, the vast majority of the committed
crimes
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 have been
done
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committed
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 by young people
in
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between
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 the age
between
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of
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 12 and 28 years old. The peak of the number of
crimes
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 was reached by the British in the early twenties (80 tens of thousands). At the same time, the frequency of
crimes
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 has decreased steadily, the older criminals are (from 20 tens of thousands in the age of 28 to less than 10 in the age of 60). In terms of types of criminality, the leading place has been taken by violent crime - 46%. Meanwhile, levels of property and drug
crimes
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 are almost the same (23% and 22% respectively). At
last
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, the public order crime has taken the smallest number - 9% only.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words crimes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • The line graph depicts
  • The pie chart illustrates
  • reveals
  • displays
  • depicts
  • the trend of
  • the overall crime rate
  • steadily decreased
  • the distribution of
  • different types of crime
  • prevalent
  • accounts for
  • the most common crime
  • followed by
  • make up
  • a smaller proportion of
  • the total crimes
  • a smaller percentage
  • approximately
  • the remaining percentage
  • It is important to note that
  • reflects
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