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Band 5.5

You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off from your work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: ask for some time off to complete the qualification suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off say how the qualification will help your job or company

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Dear Sir or Madam, I trust you are doing well. The purpose of
this
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 letter is to request
for
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apply
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paid
leaves
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leave
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 starting next week until the end of the month. First and foremost, I would like to request
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a vacation to study for my professional engineering designation, as my exam is scheduled
in
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 the
last
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 week of
this
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 month. During
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 time, I will revise all my study materials
as well as
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, if my leave application is approved
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 I will
compansate
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compensate
 by taking
some
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 additional responsibilities to expedite all of my current projects to
makeup
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 for the lost time. Perhaps, after passing
this
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 exam I will be able to practice as
licenced
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 engineer, and our company will
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get benefitted
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 because the company will not have to
out-source
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 any engineering work after I get my professional engineering designation. Thank you for your time and consideration. Sincerely, Ruchin Patel

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grammar
Make sure to check for spelling errors to enhance professionalism, for example 'compansate' should be 'compensate'.
coherence
Consider adding a brief conclusion that reiterates your request, which would improve the logical structure of your letter.
tone
The letter maintains a polite and respectful tone throughout, which is very appropriate for a formal request.
task achievement
You clearly outline how the qualification will benefit both you and the company, which strengthens your case for taking time off.
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