The chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five proportions of fruits and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008.

The bar chart illustrates five servings of fruits and vegetables eaten by people each day in the UK between 2001 and 2008.

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percentage of fruit and vegetables was by women, children accounted for the lowest proportion over the years. In general, a considerable increase in the proportion of people eating these foods can be seen over seven years. The percentage of women who ate

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started at 20% by 2001.

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trend showed a consistent increase until 2006 at over 30%,

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slightly fallen to 30% in

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2008. Regarding the children and men eating fruit and vegetables , the rate remained relatively stable in the first three years ( about 17% and 12 % respectively). Henceforth, the proportion of children gradually increased

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over 25% in 2007 ,

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around 24% in the final year.

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, the figure for men witnessed an upward trend at under 30% until both 2006 and 2007, after which it dropped to about 24% in the final year.