The graph below shows the average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The data illustrated the average CO2
emissions
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per individual in four different countries, the United
Kingdom
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,
Sweden
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, Italy, and Portugal, within a 40-year timeframe.
Overall
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, the
emission
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emissions
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was uprising
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rose
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as the years
pass
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passed
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in Italy and Portugal,
while
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there was a clear downward trend for the United
Kingdom
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. In 1967, Portugal had the least
emission
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emissions
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with under 2
tonnes
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,
although
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the United
Kingdom
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was
on
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in
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the
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apply
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first place among other countries with the most
indicator
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indicators
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,
approximately
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11
tonnes
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of
emissions
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.
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, three of the given countries - the UK, Italy and Portugal - showed slight and relatively controlled changes in carbon dioxide
emissions
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per person in
comparision
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comparison
with
Sweden
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.
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the trend was downward slope for the United
Kingdom
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, it never went below 8
tonnes
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.
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, Italy and Portugal had similar
incessent
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incessant
increase
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increases
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in
the
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apply
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CO2
emissions
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.
On the other hand
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,
Sweden
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had fluctuations within three decades; a surge between 1967 and 1977, and since
then
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the number plunged till 1987. In 2007, the CO2
emissions
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per person reached the degree for
Sweden
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and Portugal, which was almost 6
tonnes
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.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words emissions, kingdom, sweden, tonnes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "downward" was used 2 times.
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