The graph below shows the average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph illustrates data about the middle carbon dioxide emissions done by a person in 4 various countries between 1967 and 2007.
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, it's clear the United Kingdom, which was the dominant, declined slightly over the period.
However
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, Portugal, which was the inferior, increased steadily.
In addition
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to
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Sweden had a dramatic decrease.
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, Italy had fluctuation irregularly, as well in 1987 catching each other. Looking at the information in more detail, we can notice that in 1967, the United Kingdom was less than 11, but reduced to about 9
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.
However
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, Portugal started growing from roughly 2 in 1967,
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peaking
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5 in 2007 and matching with Sweden
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. Sweden got a little bit higher in , afterwards declined to around 5 in 2007 and matched Portugal.
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, Italy, which had fluctuation over time and was close to catching the United Kingdom, increased to approximately 8 in 2007

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end, however".
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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