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rate of females aged between 15-64 in different nations during 2003-2009. Correct article usage
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, the majority of the countries, including Germany, Canada, and Chile showed increasing trends with Turkey’s percentage, which recovered after minimal decline. Meanwhile, Chile was the only country that Linking Words
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Starting off with nations that followed a rising trajectory of women aged 15-64 who had jobs, Canada and Germany recorded a similar improvement in which the previous stood at just below 70% Wrong verb form
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2003
, where the latter was by 10% less at that time. In 2007 Canada reached 70% of females who were occupied, the numbers which have not changed by 2009. At the same time, Germany followed a more steady rise by around 2% each period to indicate 65% of female professionals owing jobs. Between 2003 Change preposition
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Chile saw a remarkable uprise from around 35% to 40% before increasing moderately in the later periods culminating at just above 40% in the final year. Whilst, Turkey recovered to its original index in the final year (2009), Correct word choice
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was about 25% in 2003, with Correct pronoun usage
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small
reduction in percentage in 2005 and 2007.
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Iceland reflected the highest numbers it remained Linking Words
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2007 percentages have not changed and indicated approximately 81% of Iceland women who were employed, after which the numbers fell to roughly 79% in 2009.Correct your spelling
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