IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 5

You have heard that one of your friends will be doing voluntary work at a festival. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter ask about what type of festival your friend is volunteering at and when and where it will take place ask what your friend will have to do as part of the voluntary work ask if the organisers are still looking for more volunteers and how you can apply for the work

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Dear Sam, I hope
this
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 letter finds you well. I am writing to ask about the voluntary work that you are going to do
in
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 a festival.
Firstly
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, I got to know from our common friend that you have decided to participate in an event to do some of their work. I am very curious to know what kind of function is going to be and at what location they are organising it
?
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Secondly
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, I would like to know your job duties and
responsibility
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 that you are going to perform. As far as I know, you told me that you like helping the elder people and always find a way to contribute
for
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 the betterment of our society. I hope your working role is aligned with your
interest
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. At
last
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, I am
wandering
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, if the
managment
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management
 of that festival is looking for more volunteers to assist them in managing their tasks.
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, I would love to take part
in
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.
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, let me know the procedure to apply for it, whether
online
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 option is available or
I
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if I
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need to visit their office to submit my application. Hoping to
hearing
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 back from you with all the
answer
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of
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 my questions. Regards, Mehak

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coherence
Try to clarify your questions more distinctly. Consider breaking them into numbered points or separate sentences to enhance clarity.
task achievement
The letter has a friendly tone that is suitable for communicating with a friend.
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