The table below illustrates UK participation in selected sports by gender between 2005/06 and 2008/09. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below illustrates UK participation in selected sports by gender between 2005/06 and 2008/09. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The table below illustrates UK participation in selected sports by gender between 2005/06 and 2008/09. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart indicates how many boys and girls attended nine different sports in New Zealand in 2002.
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, is notable that there is a huge gender variation in most sports, which is more evident in netball and soccer.
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, some activities register almost the same intake,
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basketball and tennis. Looking at the male preferences, almost a quarter of them used to play soccer, followed by swimming, which was the preferred choice for almost 15% of the guys.
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, females were more keen on netball, surpassing the interest of boys in soccer and reaching 25% of players. Interestingly, netball was
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the less common game among boys, in fact no more than 1%-2% subscribed to it. Tennis and basketball were the sports with the highest proportion of participation by both sexes,
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, in fact, the percentage was nearly 7% versus around 5% in basketball and 8% against 6% in tennis.

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