The pie charts above show the percentages of industry sectors contributed to the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016. Write a report of at least 150 words reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The pie charts above show the percentages of industry sectors contributed to the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016. Write a report of at least 150 words reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

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The pie charts illustrate the percentage contributions of eight different industrial sectors to Turkey’s economy in 2000 and 2016.

Overall

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, agriculture saw a significant decline in its contribution,

while

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the construction and manufacturing sectors grew.

Additionally

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, healthcare and education maintained the same percentage, making it the largest

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in 2016. In 2000, agriculture was the dominant

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, contributing 24% to the economy.

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, by 2016,

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figure had fallen sharply to 14%.

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, the construction industry grew significantly, rising from just 3% in 2000 to 10% in 2016.

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, the manufacturing

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increased from 8% to 12%. Meanwhile, trade, utilities, and transportation experienced a slight increase from 14% to 16%,

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leisure and hospitality and government services showed only minor fluctuations, with the latter decreasing from 12% to 9%. Notably, healthcare and education remained stable at 17%, making it the largest

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in 2016. The financial, business

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and other services

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sector

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maintained a small share at 5% in 2000 and 8% in 2016,

while

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the financial

sector

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had the lowest contribution in both years.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words sector with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

175 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

contribution
percentage
economic structure
agriculture
industry
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modernization
GDP (Gross Domestic Product)
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