Your workplace requires an interpreter to translate from one language to another during meetings. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter recommend someone to act as an interpreter; explain why the person is qualified for that role; say how the person can be contacted.

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Dear Sir or Madam, Hope you are doing well. I am writing

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letter to recommend one of my

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official interpreter for our company meetings. My

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name is Sandy and he is an expert in 10 international languages both in writing and speaking.

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, he even worked as a

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translator

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embassy. So, I think he is a perfect candidate and I would like to recommend him for our meeting translation. He has been working as

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in teaching languages and free most of the time. So, he can be able

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the meeting anytime and act as

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official interpreter.

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, employees are struggling to understand

Chinese

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the Chinese

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language in office discussions

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international clients. Appointing him as

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interpreter can significantly reduce these inconveniences. He can be contacted through mail Or call. I am here by attaching his

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address and phone number. I am requesting you to consider my recommendation and

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forward to your prompt response to

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matter. Yours faithfully, Santhoshkumar

ksanthosh701Tue Mar 04 2025

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coherence and cohesion

Consider structuring the letter more clearly into distinct paragraphs, each focusing on a specific point. This will help improve the overall coherence.

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Make sure to proofread for spelling and grammatical accuracy, especially for key terms and phrases. This will enhance professionalism in the letter.

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The recommendation is clear and emphasizes the individual's qualifications effectively.

coherence and cohesion

You maintained a friendly and respectful tone throughout the letter, which is appropriate for the context.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

170 words

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Your workplace requires an interpreter to translate from one language to another during meetings. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter recommend someone to act as an interpreter; explain why the person is qualified for that role; say how the person can be contacted.

A country becomes more interesting and develop more quickly when its population includes a mixture of nationalities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Investment in local amenities such as leisure centres is the best way for the government to foster a good community spirit. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

Friendships that take place online are not as meaningful as those where people meet each other face to face. To what extent do you agree or disagree?