The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The plans illustrate the current version of a
smal
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small
town called Islip and
forthcoming
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the forthcoming
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changes that will be
taken
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taking
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place
in
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.
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, it is predicted to modernize Islip by expanding amenities, improving transport, and creating pedestrian spaces, transforming it from a rural town into a more functional urban centre. Currently, the town centre is divided into three main areas: countryside, shops along the main road and housing near a park. The shops are attached
with
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the main road, with residential areas and a park nearby. The planned development will
be introduced
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significant modifications. A bus station, shopping centre, and car park will replace
to
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the north part of the existing structure, indicating improved transport and commercial facilities. New housing will
also
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be constructed, increasing residential capacity.
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, a
pedestrian only
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zone will be established, featuring shops and more new housing, enhancing walkability and urban living. A school will
also
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be introduced near housing, improving educational access

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • pedestrian-only zone
  • dual carriageway
  • current
  • surrounded by
  • propose
  • infrastructure
  • bus station
  • car park
  • residential housing
  • traffic flow
  • connectivity
  • green spaces
  • recreational areas
  • development plans
  • main features
  • town center
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