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The bar chart illustrates the percentage of UK student according to their preferred school subjects.

The bar chart illustrates the percentage of UK student according to their preferred school subjects.
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The bar chart illustrates the percentage of UK student
according to
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 their preferred school subjects. The most chosen subject for female students is the arts, comprising 32%
while
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 math is for boys with nearly 24%. For both genders, the most unfavored subject is languages with slightly below 5%. Science has relatively the same proportion for both genders hovering at 16%
whereas
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 math has a range of 15-24%.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "illustrates" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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