The graph illustrates the proportion of households in owned and rented houses in Britain from 1918 to 2011.
Overall
, in the Linking Words
beginning
the percentage of households Add a comma
beginning,
rented
Correct pronoun usage
that rented
accommodation
saw a remarkable decrease, Use synonyms
while
households in owned Linking Words
accommodation
witnessed a steady increase.
The proportion of people Use synonyms
Correct pronoun usage
who rented
rented
Wrong verb form
renting
accommodation
accounted for around 76% in 1918, Use synonyms
then
it dropped to around 68% in 1939 and remained it until 1953 before decreasing decade by decade to just above 30% in 2000, Linking Words
Linking Words
finally
it slightly recovered 36% in 2011.
On the Add a comma
finally,
hand
, people bought Correct word choice
other hand
accommodation
Use synonyms
with
approximately 24% in 1918, it increased Change preposition
by
nearly
double Change preposition
to nearly
with
around 50% in 1971. In the following decade, the percentage of owned surpassed rented to become the highest, Change preposition
to
also
reached Linking Words
the
peak point Correct article usage
a
with
nearly 70% in 2001 and it slightly dropped to 64% in 2011.Change preposition
of
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