You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter - give details of your study plans - explain why you want to get a part-time job - suggest how your friend could help you find a job You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear _______,
Dear
khushi
,
I hope you are doing good.I am very excited to give you Change the capitalization
Khushi
a
news and I am sure you are going to be on cloud nine when you read Correct determiner usage
some
this
.I decided to move to Mumbai for my higher studies.I opt for chemical laboratory technician.As you know me well and are aware of my passion Linking Words
with
chemistry.I always wanted to be a laboratory technician.I feel like Change preposition
for
this
Linking Words
job
is made specifically for me.I Use synonyms
manage
to Wrong verb form
managed
take
Verb problem
be
admission
Replace the word
admitted
in
Change preposition
to
an
university which is Change the article
a
as
walking distance from your place.I was wondering if you could help me Change preposition
within
finding
a Wrong verb form
find
part time
Add a hyphen
part-time
job
as you know my current financial situation. I am fully dependent on my parents Use synonyms
of
everything. I wanted to do Change preposition
for
part time
Correct your spelling
a part-time
job
to help them with some of the bills and university fees.I decided to pay the whole Use synonyms
fees
all by myself.For Fix the agreement mistake
fee
this
, I need Linking Words
you
help.If you can help me land a decent paying Change the pronoun
your
part time
Add a hyphen
part-time
job
, it can relieve some burden.I will forever be grateful to you.The university is close to your house so it will be easier for you to connect with some of the employees and help me with the Use synonyms
job
Use synonyms
searching
.I am waiting for your response
Yours truly
XyzReplace the word
search
riyaparikh005
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coherence and cohesion
Consider breaking your ideas into clearer paragraphs to improve readability. For instance, you might separate your study plans, reasons for wanting a job, and requests for help into distinct sections.
coherence and cohesion
Make sure to use more varied sentence structures to enhance the flow of your writing. This can also help to convey your enthusiasm more effectively.
task response
You might want to specify what kind of part-time jobs you are looking for, as this could give your friend a clearer direction in helping you.
task achievement
Your enthusiasm about moving to Mumbai and starting your studies is well expressed, making the letter engaging to read.
task achievement
The tone of your letter is friendly and warm, which is appropriate for writing to a friend.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,