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The line graph below shows the production of paper, wood puplp and sawn-wood in the UK from 1980 to 2000. Assel

The line graph below shows the production of paper, wood puplp and sawn-wood in the UK from 1980 to 2000. Assel
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The line graph demonstrates the production of
forest
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 industry in the United Kingdom over 20 years.
Overall
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 the manufactures
wood
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 pulp and sawn
wood
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 waved between the certain period,
while
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 the paper packing significantly increased during the years. Now turning the details, the number of produced paper materials rose slightly from almost 220
million
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tones
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 in 1980 to 250
million
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 in 1990,
then
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 suddenly jumped gradually to 350
million
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 and reached a peak in 2000.  We can see that
wood
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productions
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 stayed in the
mid
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 from 150 to 200
millions
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million
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 and equalized with each other. There was a downward trend for the sawn
wood
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 almost
to
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120
million
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tones
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 in 2000. In the
middle
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 it was
a
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 insignificant proportion for
wood
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 pulp
by
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10
million
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tones
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tonnes
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 and peaked
almost
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at almost
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 160
million
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tones
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tonnes
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 in 2000.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words wood, million, tones with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
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