The chart below shows the percentage of household in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant

The chart below shows the percentage of household in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows the percentage of household in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant
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It is clear that
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the percentage of households in rented
accommodation
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was much higher at the beginning of the
period
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,
whereas
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during the second half of the
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period
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period,
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more homes were privatised.
Overall
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, the proportion of families living in rented
accommodation
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outweighed slightly those in owned one. Focusing first on the first half of the
period
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, in 1918, almost 80% of families accommodated rented housing,
whereas
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for
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those inhabitants having their own housing, the corresponding figure was nearly 50% lower.
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the following years, the percentage of households paying monthly rent for their
accommodation
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decreased gradually, with only 50% in 1971, which was exactly the same as for the families living in private homes. As for the remaining
period
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, starting from 1971, the frequency of residents acquiring flats or houses started to increase significantly, reaching the level of 70% by 2011, as opposed to those paying their rent , with 30% of households.
However
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, by 2011, the proportion of owned
accommodation
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decreased by 5%,
while
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rented
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increased by the same figure.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words accommodation, period with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend
  • proportion
  • household
  • accommodation
  • owned
  • rented
  • historical context
  • economic challenges
  • post-World War I
  • homeownership
  • government policies
  • societal attitudes
  • property ownership
  • economic prosperity
  • fluctuations
  • housing market dynamics
  • accessibility
  • demographic shifts
  • transient population
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