The bar graph below shows the numbers of male and female research students studying six computer science subjects at a US university in 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar graph below shows the numbers of male and female research students studying six computer science subjects at a US university in 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The bar graph below shows the numbers of male and female research students studying six computer science subjects at a US university in 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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ınvestigation pupils learning siz computer
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at a US college in 2011.
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, it is clearly shown that students research mostly the natural
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subject. What is more girls and boys researched equally the natural
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topic.
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lowest study area is mathematics and
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linguistics. Starting with girls, in
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chart
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is
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studying mainly natural
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,
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is about 200
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women
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psychology field it is approximately 180
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, mathematics is
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minority research area
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is
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interested mostly
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and natural
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and
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about 200
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, 200 men researched
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field. Linguistics subject is not engaged meaning for
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words science with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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