The chart below shows the percentage in the share of international students among university graduates in different Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the percentage in the share of international students among university graduates in different Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows the percentage in the share of international students among university graduates in different Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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foreign students among university graduates across various Canadian provinces from 2001 to 2006.
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, in 2001, the proportion of international learners was significantly lower compared to the rate in 2006, when the percentages increased.
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, in the early 2000s, the universities in Ontario, Newfoundland, Labrador, Manitoba, British Columbia, and Alberta had similar percentages, around 5%.
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, the universities in Quebec, Nova Scotia, and New Brunswick exhibited a rate close to 7%.
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, Ontario had the lowest part at 3.5%,
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New Brunswick had the highest at 7%.
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, in 2006, New Brunswick recorded the highest percentage (about 12%), followed by Nova Scotia and British Columbia with a share close to 11%.
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, the university in Alberta had the lowest fraction at approximately 4%. Manitoba, Newfoundland, Labrador and Ontario ended the period with
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rate between 6% to 8%.

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