The bar chart shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruitd and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008.

The bar chart provides key information about the average of the five portions of fruit and vegetables per day in the United Kingdom from 2001 to 2008. The units are measured in per cent.

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, it is clear from the graph that the

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had increased significantly from 20% to 30% between 2001 and 2008 in the United Kingdom.

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, when the

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and children sectors slightly increased between 2001 and 2008,

whereas

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the

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had a rapid

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between 2001 and 2008 in the UK.

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what is shown, the

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and children sectors between 2001 and 2003 were a steady

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, but after 2003, the

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was a gradual

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until 2006,

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and children sectors

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a slow

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until 2008. In terms of

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, it

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rapidly increased until the peak in 2006, after that, the

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slightly decreased until

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in 2008