The line graph shows the percentage of different age groups of cinema visitors in a particular country from 1978 to 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph shows the percentage of different age groups of cinema visitors in a particular country from 1978 to 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart displays the percentage of four categories of cinema visitors in one country over the period of 1978 to 2008
overall
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,
people
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from 14 to 49
shwoes
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shows
shoes
decrease in
figers
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fingers
.
people
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aged 50 and over illustrate
increase
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an increase
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throughout the period. in 1978,
people
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how are
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apply
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between 14 and 24 years old visited the screens
for
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apply
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90% before
its
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it
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start
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started
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to sharply
decreased
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decrease
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just
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to just
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under 80% in 1988 before
its
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it
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go
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went
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back to 90% and still
study
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studied
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through 1988 and 2003 before
its
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it
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went
dawn
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down
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again to
the
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apply
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80%.
people
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who are aged above 50
start
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starts
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at the least
percent
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per cent
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of the four groups at 40% in 1978 and
deacresed
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decreased
in 1988 at 20% before
its
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it
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rose back in 1998 to 40 %
stable
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and stable
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in 2003 before it
increase
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increased
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to reach its peak at 50% in 2008.
young
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Young
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people
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, 34-49 and 25-34, have similar behavior. they start in
realtively
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relatively
in
hight
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high
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numbers, at 80% and 60%
respectivilly
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respectively
. before they
diclined
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declined
in 1988 at 60 for 25-34 and 40% for 35-49.
at
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In
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the same year, they
start
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started
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to rise and stable their
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figures
figuers
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figures
for five years at 70% and 60.
after
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After
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2003 they decreased
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slightly
slightlly
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slightly
to reach 50% for 35-49 and
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above
aove
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over
60% for 25-34

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Linking words: Add more linking words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words people with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • age group
  • cinema visitors
  • trend
  • increase
  • decrease
  • notable
  • decline
  • comparison
  • decade
  • growth
  • overall
  • particular
  • briefly
  • highlight
  • analyze
  • significant
  • similarities
  • implications
  • stakeholders
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