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The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevante.

The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevante.
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The graph illustrates how much money was spent in several countries on buying books from 1995 to 10 years ago.
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, it is clear enough that books were popular in Germany. For 10 years, Germany was the highest, even though the data has fluctuated enough. In 1995, 80
million
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 USD was spent on books and increased by exactly 10
million
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 in 1999. It had a moderate decrease in 2003, between 80 and 90
million
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, before reaching its peak of almost 100
million
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 in 2005. France had risen moderately since 1995, from between 50 and 60 to more than 70
million
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 in 2005 Italy was unique. Almost surpassed France in 1997,
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 it had a small
fell
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 in 1999 in the amount of exactly 50
million
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 before increased stability in the
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 period. Austria got the extreme incremental. Starting at 30
million
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 in 1995,
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 they increased gradually to 40 in 2021 before surpassing Italy in 2003 and still had an extreme increase in 2005 to more than 70
million
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Vocabulary: Replace the words million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "moderate" was used 2 times.
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