The chart below shows what History graduates did after completing their undergraduate degree course from a university is the UK. The table shows the sectors these graduates were employed withing six years of graduating and their average income.

The chart below shows what History graduates did after completing their undergraduate degree course from a university is the UK. The table shows the sectors these graduates were employed withing six years of graduating and their average income.
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The pie chart illustrates the course History
graduates
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chose after pursuing their undergraduate degree from a British university,
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the table provides information about the employment sectors where they were employed within 6 years of their graduation and their average annual incomes.
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, a major portion of
graduates
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preferred to work full-time or part-time, there were
also
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some who pursued
further
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education or remained unemployed. In terms of employment, most
graduates
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taught History,
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very few preferred becoming Archaeologists. Becoming a Solicitor paid the most. More than half the degree holders preferred working full-time and part-time, with 56% and 15% respectively. Opposing to that, 12% of students remained unemployed. Some went ahead to pursue higher education; they made up 11% combining 4% studying part-time and 7% full-time. 6% of them had unknown career paths. Most
graduates
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preferred to become History teachers which paid them an average of €32,000, and some became historians earning €49,000, making it the second most paying sector. Becoming a solicitor paid the highest,
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, €57,000 contradicting the annual income of an archaeologist, which was the least. Some students were working in other sectors where they earned an average income of €30,000.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 69%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words graduates with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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