The bar chart shows the literacy rate (% of people who can read and write) by region and gender in 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows the literacy rate (% of people who can read and write) by region and gender in 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The bar chart shows the literacy rate (% of people who can read and write) by region and gender in 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram illustrates reading and writing proficiency proportions for both males and females in seven distinct regions of the world in 2011.
Overall
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, five places show differences in educated individuals,
while
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two places remain the same. It was
firstly
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observed that Central Asia had the highest literacy
rate
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, approximately 100% for both genders. The
rate
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was a bit lower in Central/ Eastern Europe, at nearly 100%. In East Asia/ Pacific, the figure remained close to 100% for men, but a gap started to appear, with the percentage for women decreasing to just over 95%. In other areas
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as Latin America/ Caribbean, Arab States,
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and West Asia, the numbers continued to decline, at roughly 95%, 90%, and 80% for males,
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for females, it stood at around 90%, 80% and 60%. The region with the highest illiteracy
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surveyed was Sub-Saharan Africa, where the number of people being literate was recorded at about 70% for men and 60% for women. In summary, in most areas, men had a higher literacy
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than women with a variation of 5% to 20%.

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