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The pie charts below show units of eletricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000. Summarise the information by selectiong and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show units of eletricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000. Summarise the information by selectiong and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie graphs compare information from two distinct years of numbers of produced electricity by different
fuel
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sources
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 in countries
Australia
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 and
France
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.
Overall
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, in the past
Australia
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's main source was coal ,
however
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 ,
France
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 had approximately equally distributed
fuel
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 types. Over time , the primary
fuel
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 of
Australia
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 did not change, but
France
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 became dependent on nuclear
energy
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. In 1980,
Australia
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 produced 100 and
France
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 90 units. Exact the half of produced electro power in
Australia
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 by coal , but ,
France
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 only manufactured 25 by coal as same as by gases. The other half of
energy
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sources
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 in
Australia
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 are hydropower, with the same statistics as for natural gas and a relatively small amount of
oil
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. At that time , French
energy
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sources
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 consisted of big sections of
oil
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 and little parts of nuclear and hydro powers. By 2000 year, Australian electricity producers manufactured more than 70 units than 20 years ago. In comparison,
France
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 doubled the total
energy
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 and reached 180. In both countries about 130
energy
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 power were produced with one source of
fuel
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 , coal and nuclear power, respectively. Use of natural gases and
oil
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 in
Australia
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 until 2 units,
although
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 ,
France
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 did not decrease proportions of coal and
oil
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, even other
sources
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 have very small scales.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words fuel, sources, australia, france, energy, oil with synonyms.
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