You and your family are planning to spend a weekend at a seaside hotel. Write a letter to the hotel for making the arrangement. In your letter say, - when you will be arriving and leaving - what type of rooms you would like and ask how much the weekend will cost - inquire about activities and places of interest near the hotel
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to book a room in your Linking Words
hotel
which is located at the seaside. It is for a family of 5 members and we are arriving on Friday night the 4th of April and leaving the Use synonyms
hotel
on Saturday the 12th of April.
As I mentioned above it is for 5 people, including me, my husband, my grandparents, and Use synonyms
one
child. I prefer to book two rooms on the same floor, Use synonyms
one
for my child and grandparents and Use synonyms
one
for us. We want a balcony outside of our room with a mesmerizing sunset view from the window Use synonyms
along with
some toys for my kid in his room. Apart from that, we prefer to have breakfast Linking Words
as well as
lunch in our rooms. If you do not mind, could you please let me know the price of both the rooms Linking Words
along with
mealsLinking Words
.
Change the punctuation
?
Moreover
, Linking Words
although
we make our own Linking Words
itineray
for travel, we would love to know more about the attractive Correct your spelling
itinerary
tourists
places that are near Change the noun form
tourist
by
your Change preposition
apply
hotel
. Use synonyms
Is
there any fun Change the verb form
Are
activites
for children in the Correct your spelling
activities
hotel
? Despite the Use synonyms
activites
for kids Correct your spelling
activities
is
there any spa shops Correct subject-verb agreement
are
are
available for females? I am really excited to visit your Unnecessary verb
apply
hotel
because I heard so much about your Use synonyms
hotel
from Use synonyms
one
of my friends.
I am looking forward to your prompt response.
Your Faithfully,
Manjinder KaurUse synonyms
kmanjinder981
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coherence and cohesion
Consider organizing your letter with clear paragraphs that each focus on a specific request or topic. This will enhance clarity and improve logical structure.
task response
Make sure to double-check the dates mentioned for accuracy. This helps provide a clear understanding of your request.
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Your letter has a polite and professional tone, which is suitable for addressing a hotel.
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You've provided detailed information about your family's needs and special requirements, which helps the hotel understand your request better.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite