You and your family are planning to spend a weekend at a seaside hotel. Write a letter to the hotel for making the arrangement. In your letter say, - when you will be arriving and leaving - what type of rooms you would like and ask how much the weekend will cost - inquire about activities and places of interest near the hotel

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
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letter to book a room in your
hotel
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which is located at the seaside. It is for a family of 5 members and we are arriving on Friday night the 4th of April and leaving the
hotel
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on Saturday the 12th of April. As I mentioned above it is for 5 people, including me, my husband, my grandparents, and
one
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child. I prefer to book two rooms on the same floor,
one
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for my child and grandparents and
one
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for us. We want a balcony outside of our room with a mesmerizing sunset view from the window
along with
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some toys for my kid in his room. Apart from that, we prefer to have breakfast
as well as
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lunch in our rooms. If you do not mind, could you please let me know the price of both the rooms
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meals
.
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Moreover
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,
although
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we make our own
itineray
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itinerary
for travel, we would love to know more about the attractive
tourists
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tourist
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places that are near
by
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apply
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your
hotel
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.
Is
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there any fun
activites
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activities
for children in the
hotel
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? Despite the
activites
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activities
for kids
is
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there any spa shops
are
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apply
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available for females? I am really excited to visit your
hotel
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because I heard so much about your
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from
one
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of my friends. I am looking forward to your prompt response. Your Faithfully, Manjinder Kaur

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coherence and cohesion
Consider organizing your letter with clear paragraphs that each focus on a specific request or topic. This will enhance clarity and improve logical structure.
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Make sure to double-check the dates mentioned for accuracy. This helps provide a clear understanding of your request.
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Your letter has a polite and professional tone, which is suitable for addressing a hotel.
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You've provided detailed information about your family's needs and special requirements, which helps the hotel understand your request better.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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