You and your family are planning to spend a weekend at a seaside hotel. Write a letter to the hotel for making the arrangement. In your letter say, - when you will be arriving and leaving - what type of rooms you would like and ask how much the weekend will cost - inquire about activities and places of interest near the hotel

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

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letter to book a room in your

hotel

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which is located at the seaside. It is for a family of 5 members and we are arriving on Friday night the 4th of April and leaving the

hotel

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on Saturday the 12th of April. As I mentioned above it is for 5 people, including me, my husband, my grandparents, and

one

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child. I prefer to book two rooms on the same floor,

one

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for my child and grandparents and

one

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for us. We want a balcony outside of our room with a mesmerizing sunset view from the window

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some toys for my kid in his room. Apart from that, we prefer to have breakfast

as well as

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lunch in our rooms. If you do not mind, could you please let me know the price of both the rooms

along with

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meals

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Moreover

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although

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we make our own

itineray

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itinerary

for travel, we would love to know more about the attractive

tourists

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tourist

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places that are near

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apply

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your

hotel

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there any fun

activites

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activities

for children in the

hotel

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? Despite the

activites

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activities

for kids

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there any spa shops

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available for females? I am really excited to visit your

hotel

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because I heard so much about your

hotel

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from

one

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of my friends. I am looking forward to your prompt response. Your Faithfully, Manjinder Kaur

kmanjinder981Fri Mar 28 2025

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coherence and cohesion

Consider organizing your letter with clear paragraphs that each focus on a specific request or topic. This will enhance clarity and improve logical structure.

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Make sure to double-check the dates mentioned for accuracy. This helps provide a clear understanding of your request.

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Your letter has a polite and professional tone, which is suitable for addressing a hotel.

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You've provided detailed information about your family's needs and special requirements, which helps the hotel understand your request better.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

233 words

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