You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter: describe the item explain where and when you left it say what action you would like the company to take ​ You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir I am writing
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letter to inform you that I lost my armlet on your
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during my journey from Edmonton to Calgary It was a white-coloured bangle with some crystals on the top.I purchased it from the Royal Jewelry Shop of Edmonton when
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was there for a visit. I bought that ornament to wear
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on any special occasion. I lost it when the
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reached
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calgary
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Calgary
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and
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remember
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was moving out all my luggage from the
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in a hurry as trains usually have a
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stamp of two minutes on every stop.
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, the
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when
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was near to parking area
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realised that
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the ornament
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that
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was wearing was not
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my wrist anymore. As per my understanding,
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am pretty sure that
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lost my trinket in the same
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coach in which
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was
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travelling
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so
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want the railway authorities should take strict measures to find my wristband as it was very expensive.
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this
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informed the nearest head office to check the
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going
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the same
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zone. I really appreciate your support during
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time
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and hope to receive positive feedback from you soon Best regards Ashir Syal

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coherence and cohesion
Make sure to include a proper salutation or greeting such as 'Dear Sir or Madam' instead of 'Dear Sir'.
task achievement
In the conclusion, a more formal closing remark would improve the tone, for instance, replacing 'I hope to receive positive feedback' with 'I look forward to your prompt response'.
coherence and cohesion
Consider using more transitions between ideas to improve the logical flow of the letter, such as adding 'Furthermore' or 'Additionally' at the beginning of paragraphs.
task achievement
You clearly described the lost item and the circumstances around its loss, which meets the task requirements effectively.
task achievement
Your letter conveys a polite tone and expresses gratitude towards the railway company's potential assistance, which is commendable.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • valuable item
  • distinctive features
  • left behind
  • compartment
  • last seen
  • retrieved
  • item description
  • identifying information
  • contact
  • lost and found
  • appropriate department
  • expeditious
  • immediate assistance
  • trace
  • recovery
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