The bar chart shows the percentage of Canadians who donated money to charity in different
age
groups between 2000 and 2015.
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Overall
, the proportion of Linking Words
middle
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middle-aged
age
donors contributed more than any other Use synonyms
age
group given in the chart Use synonyms
eventhough
the proportion varies slightly over the period of fifteen years.
By taking a closer look, people belonging to the Correct your spelling
even though
age
range 35 to 49 years and 50 to 64 years donated more than any other Use synonyms
age
range in both 2000 and 2015.
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On
the year 2000, Change preposition
In
middle
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middle-aged
age
individuals Use synonyms
was
the majority of almost 40% in terms of donors Change the verb form
were
while
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on
the year 2015, Change preposition
in
old
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old-aged
age
individuals Use synonyms
take
the lead by almost 38%.Wrong verb form
took
Furthermore
, the Linking Words
overall
percentage of donors was Linking Words
more
in 2000 than in 2015.
By probing Correct word choice
higher
further
, we can say that younger individuals are less generous as people from 18 to 24 only contributed 20% in 2000 and an even lower of 10% in 2015 so they are a minority. Linking Words
On the other hand
, older Linking Words
goups
consist of a larger proportion and donate more than 60% of all Correct your spelling
groups
donor
on the chart.Fix the agreement mistake
donors
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