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The charts show the projections for global production by sector 2030 and 2050. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts show the projections for global production by sector 2030 and 2050. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given pie charts show global projections in 20 years. Generally speaking, there are minor changes will be
done
Verb problem
made
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in least
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in the least
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 popular
productions
Use synonyms
 and most, which is two.
Largest
Correct article usage
The largest
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productions
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 will
be
Unnecessary verb
apply
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slightly increase
in
Change preposition
by
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 1% and 2.6% respectively. Meanwhile,
four
Correct article usage
the four
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 least popular
productions
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 will neither increase nor decrease.
Collapse
Correct article usage
The collapse
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 wave will affect energy and agriculture
productions
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in
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at
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 2.4% and 2% respectively,
whereas
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 materials and Info-Com Tech
productions
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 have
vise
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vice
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 versa, they rise in percentage
for
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at
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 0.6 and 0.3 respectively.
Overall
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, there is no significant difference in 20 years
due to
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statisticaly
Correct your spelling
statistically
statistical
 low numbers.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words productions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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