You are going to take a short holiday in Singapore and you want to rent a holiday apartment while your are there. Write a letter to the tourist information office. In your letter: - Explain what you need - Say when you plan to be there - ask for information about prices

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Dear Tourist Information

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officers

offciers

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officers

, My name is Robbie and I am writing

this

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email to enquire

some

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about some

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information about planning my stay in Singapore between 1st October to 5th October. I would like to have some support in renting an apartment for the trip, as I am unfamiliar with the city's geography. Starting with the apartment location, I would prefer to stay

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apply

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somewhere convenient with

assessible

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assessable

accessible

public

transportations

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transportation

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is extremely crucial for my trip because I intend to go sightseeing around the city. In

addtion

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addition

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, it will

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be better if the place is

cozy

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and tranquil, as I am quite

senstive

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sensitive

noice

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noise

when sleeping.

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, as a university graduate with a relatively restricted spending budget, I am keen

in searching

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affordable

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for affordable

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options for my stay in the country.

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, it would be really helpful if you could share some rental websites or links that I can look for budget short-term rentals. Thank you for your

considerations

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and I look forward to hearing from you. Regards, Robbie

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spelling

Ensure correct spelling, especially in words like 'officers' and 'accessible' for better accuracy and professionalism.

structure

Consider breaking down long sentences for clarity, as shorter sentences can enhance readability.

task achievement

The letter addresses the purpose of the inquiry clearly and specifies the desired location and amenities for the apartment.

coherence and cohesion

The closing of the letter is polite and expresses eagerness for a response, which is appropriate for a formal letter.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

172 words

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