The two bar charts depict the males and females' percentage of employment between 60 and 64 years old in Australia, Japan,
USA
and Belgium in 1970 and 2000. Correct article usage
the USA
Overall
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man
worked more than Fix the agreement mistake
men
woman
in both years and in all the countries. Fix the agreement mistake
women
Beside
, Replace the word
Besides
while
the percentage of Linking Words
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man
employment in 1970 Fix the agreement mistake
men
were
higher all over the countries compared to 2000, women in 1970 worked more than in 2000 just in Japan and Belgium.
First and foremost, in Australia, despite 74% of Correct subject-verb agreement
was
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man
Fix the agreement mistake
men
were
employed in 1970, nearly Wrong verb form
being
one third
of Add a hyphen
one-third
woman
(18%) were hired the same year. Fix the agreement mistake
women
Similarly
, the percentage of Linking Words
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man
employment in Japan (76% and 84%) was almost double in both years compared to women, respectively 40% and 43%.Fix the agreement mistake
men
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