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The graph below shows the population of India and China from the year 2000 to the present day with projections for growth to the year 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the population of India and China from the year 2000 to the present day with projections for growth to the year 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates the transformation of the
population
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 in
India
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 and
China
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, including the prediction, between 2000 and 2050.
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,
China
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's
population
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 recorded and projected a consistent increase throughout five decades,
while
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India
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 is expected to see both growth and decline. In 2000,
India
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 started with lower numbers compared to
China
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 at 1,000
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billions
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.
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, they experienced a dramatic increase to 1,400
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billions
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billion
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untill
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until
 2025, and
also
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 projected the trend for rising to just 1,530
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billions
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 in 2040 and almost 1,600
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billions
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 by 2050. Eventually,
India
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 is expected to surpass
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china's
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China's
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population
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 by the 2035s, with approximately 1,490
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billions
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billion
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.
China
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,
on the other hand
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, stood at around 1,250
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billions
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billion
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 in 2000,
then
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 slightly increased to about 1,440
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billions
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billion
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 by 2025s. In terms of projection,
China
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 is predicted to remain relatively stable by 2040 with 1,430
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billions
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billion
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, but consistently
dropped
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 to 1,400
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billions
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billion
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 by 2050, indicating that
India
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 can't overtake the
population
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 of
China
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. In summary,
china
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 had the highest
population
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,
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 but will experience a steady decline, being surpassed by
India
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 after 2030.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, india, china, billions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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