The given line graph provides the data about the proportion of
female
aged 15-64 in employment from 2003 to 2009 . In Fix the agreement mistake
females
this
essay, I will describe the comparison in female employment between different countries Linking Words
such
asLinking Words
,
Iceland,Canada,Turkey,Germany and Chile.
Remove the comma
apply
Overall
, as can be seen from the line graph Linking Words
is
Iceland Unnecessary verb
apply
leading
the higher position in women’s employment Wrong verb form
leads
comparing
with other countries. Wrong verb form
compared
Linking Words
However
in Add a comma
However,
2009
Iceland had Add a comma
2009,
slight
fall but between 2003 and 2007 it stayed on Correct article usage
a slight
plateau
.
Now turning to the details, we can see that Chile and Germany have increased results than it was Add an article
the plateau
a plateau
in
the beginning of 2003. Turkey and Canada have a period of stability in female worker percentage in different areas from 2003 to 2009.Change the preposition
at
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