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You have purchased some goods from a company and the goods were supposed to be delived within three days of purchase. Seven days have already gone and you have not received the products yet. Write a letter to a company manager with whom you arranged the delivery of goods. In your letter: inform him/her what itmes you have purchased ask the reason for the delay in delivery suggest what can be done about this matter

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Dear Sir, I am writing
this
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 letter regarding the concern about the undelivered parcel tracking number Z2XXXXX 001. On 28th March, three
dresses
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 and
hand
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a
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 bag were purchased from Zara and
supposed
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 to be delivered on 3rd April but now it's been seven days and have not received my package. With regards to shopping, I bought
dresses
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 for the gala party
in
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 my college on the 10th of April. Unfortunately, It's already been five days and I have not received my package yet, the tracking number
also
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not
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proving
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me
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any details. It's just three days left for
party
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 and not decided if those
dresses
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 will fit
on
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me or not. I don't have enough time to purchase new
dresses
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 and there
is
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 no good shopping places near
to
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my place. I would kindly request you to
investigatige
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investigate
 the issue on priority and inform the reason for the delay. I always used to order online and
received
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receive
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 my parcels on time. Kindly, please let me know if you need any details from my end. Appreciate
for
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your time and will wait for your
promt
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prompt
 response to
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 matter. Yours
sincerly
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sincerely
 Ashima Gulati

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coherence and cohesion
Ensure that the structure of the letter is clear and logical. It's good to separate your concerns about the delay and your request for information into distinct paragraphs.
task achievement
Try to maintain a formal tone throughout the letter. Avoid contractions like 'It's' and 'I've' for a more professional approach.
task achievement
The letter includes relevant details such as the purchase date, the items, and the tracking number, which aids in understanding the situation.
coherence and cohesion
You have politely requested action regarding the delay and expressed your appreciation for the company's attention to the matter.
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