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Pie charts illustrate comparison of the proportion of energy capacity in unit of gigawatts in 2015 and predicted 2040 year.

Pie charts illustrate comparison of the proportion of energy capacity in unit of gigawatts in 2015 and predicted 2040 year.
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Pie charts illustrate
comparison
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a comparison
the comparison
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 of the proportion of
energy
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 capacity in
unit
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 of gigawatts in 2015 and predicted 2040 year. Total
energy
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 capacity in 2015 was 6.688 GW with separations on Fossil fuels, Wind, Nuclear, Solar and other renewables. Fossil fuel took more than half of
chart
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the chart
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 and was led with
its
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apply
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64%. Other renewables took the second place, almost
in
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3 times less than fossil. Nuclear
energy
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 is the most popular type of
energy
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 in
renewable
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the renewable
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energy
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 list with
its
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6%.
Wind
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The wind
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 fell behind
on
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by
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 only 1%
comparing
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compared
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 with nuclear
energy
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 and solar
energy
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 was less popular than nuclear
in
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apply
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3
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time
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times
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.
According to
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 predictions for 2040
energy
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 capacity will surge approximately
in
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apply
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2
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time
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times
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.
Using
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of
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fossil fuels sources will shortage in third.
Index
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 of other renewables won’t
be change
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 sharply but
popularity
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the popularity
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 of solar
energy
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 will rocket
in
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apply
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9
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time
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times
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. Wind
also
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 will grow
it’s
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its
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 usage percentage more than
in
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2
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time
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times
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.
However
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, nuclear
energy
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 going to drop one
percent
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per cent
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of
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in
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 popularity after the 25 years

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Contractions: Don't use contractions.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, time with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "illustrate" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "comparison" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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