You have bought clothes from a shop in a different city, and one garmen turned out to be defective. Write a letter to the manager of the store an explain What did you buy there? What defect did you find? How would you like to solve this issue?

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Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter to you about my dissatisfaction about productivity regarding the clothes. My name is Veerpal Kaur,

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week

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visited your store branch in Lidhiana with my mother. I bought a few clothes for myself, it is

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apply

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two dresses with my favourite design and colours which

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want to wear to my friend's birthday party. One attire is perfectly fine for me but when

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tried the second one, the zip at the back was broken. I was so excited to wear that costume on a special occasion but now

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could not wear it it. Actually that time I

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a hurry that's why I

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did

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not try that gown but it's your staff's responsibility to check the customer's order properly. I am living so far from Ludhiana,

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could not travel to your shop because of my hectic schedule to visit my friend's birthday party. I will send you that dress

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my address on it. It would be appreciated if you fix it in a short time and send

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back. So I can wear

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it to

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a party. I am waiting to see the parcel from you. Yours faithfully, Veerpal Kaur

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Consider improving the introduction by stating the purpose of your letter more clearly. A brief overview of your experience could enhance clarity.

coherence and cohesion

Try to separate your ideas into distinct paragraphs for better flow. For example, one paragraph for the purchase details, another for the defect, and a concluding paragraph for your request.

task achievement

You have clearly explained the purchase and the defect you encountered, which is essential for effective communication.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

202 words

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