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Writing Samples
Band 3.5

Your local library is hiring a new staff member,and you are interested in applying for the position. Write a letter to the library manager to apply for the job.

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Dear Sir/Madam I am writing
enquiring
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as to whether you currently have any position in the area of librarian. I saw an announcement on my university's board notes.
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 really caught my attention and sparked my interest in
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 position because of my strong passion for reading books.For 5 years
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 have worked in
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 administrative position where
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 developed excellent organization and communication skills.
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 believe that I am the best choice in my previous role.if there any additional documents or steps required to completely my appreciation. Thank you for taking the time to read
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 my application.
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 sincerely Paul Jankis

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Task Achievement
Make sure to clearly express your interest in the specific position you are applying for, and briefly explain why you are a suitable candidate.
Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single idea to improve clarity and readability. Consider organizing your thoughts more distinctly.
Coherence and Cohesion
Polish the introductory and closing statements to improve formality and professionalism.
Task Achievement
You demonstrate a clear passion for books and reading, which is relevant to the librarian position.
Task Achievement
Your professional experience in an administrative role is relevant and adds weight to your application.

Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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