Your manager has asked you to arrange a party for a colleague leaving the company. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter •suggest a suitable date and time for the party •recommend a venue •propose the food and entertainment options that should be available.

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Dear Manager, I hope

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letter finds you well and in good spirits. I am writing

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letter regarding

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apply

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our farewell staff party in

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the next

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two months. I am Alexa I work as

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a sale

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sale

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sales

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consultant

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for

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ABC company. I would like to suggest the

schedule

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date and time for our party on Friday 25th May 2025 because it will be a long weekend

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next week

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we have Monday off

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a public holiday. I would like to recommend the place for our party at BT restaurant because I have been there many times with my family to celebrate our special day. There are plenty of food and

beverage

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to prepare.

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, there are so many

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entertainment options available in a meeting room not only karaoke but

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including

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game

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, cards etc.

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, I believe that

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place

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suitable for our staff and will give a good memorable to our retirement staff. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Best regard, Alexa

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greeting and closing

Ensure that the greeting addresses the manager directly, possibly using their name, to create a more personal tone.

logical structure

Consider separating your points into distinct paragraphs to improve clarity and readability.

single idea per paragraph

Refine your wording to enhance grammatical accuracy, such as using 'the scheduled date' instead of 'schedule date', and 'this place is suitable' instead of 'this place are suitable'.

task achievement

The suggestion of a long weekend for the party date shows thoughtfulness to accommodate the colleagues' plans.

task achievement

The choice of venue and entertainment options reflects good consideration for a fun and enjoyable atmosphere.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

168 words

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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