The bar chart illustrates the percentage of how parents in a country spent time taking care their children in the evening in 2022. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart illustrates the percentage of how parents in a country spent time taking care their children in the evening in 2022. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The bar chart illustrates the percentage of how parents in a country spent time taking care their children in the evening in 2022. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart
depict
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the
variaty
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variety
of how parents spend time taking care
their
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children before night in
defferent
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different
ways.
According to
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the chart Mothers have the highest bars in the chart, starting with Dressing taking 75% portion, and homework by half,
then
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preparing for bed almost 42% and
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last
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one is playing games quarter.
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While
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Fathers
is spending
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less time which is
lowest
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the lowest
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bars
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, beginning with homework
10
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%
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then
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and then
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playing games and preparing for bed same ratio
around
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5% and the lowest one is dressing
2
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%.
Overall
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, both parents
togther
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together
spending
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the most time
in
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playing games
70
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at 70
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%,
then
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preparing for bed
half
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with half
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of the percentage, after that homework
with
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38% and
finally
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Dressing
21
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%.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • bar chart
  • Percentage
  • Parents
  • Spent time
  • Taking care
  • Children
  • Evening
  • 2022
  • Summarise
  • Information
  • Main features
  • Comparisons
  • Relevant
  • Patterns
  • Trends
  • Highest
  • Lowest
  • Activities
  • Gender
  • Conclusion
  • Findings
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