The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, ltaly and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, ltaly and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart below demonstrates the
emissions
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of carbon dioxide in average consumption per person in four countries, namely, the United Kingdom, Sweden,
ltaly
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Italy
and Portugal over the period.
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,
while
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in both Portugal and Italy, CO2 increased rapidly over the entire period, in Sweden and the UK greenhouse gases decreased significantly from 1967 to 2007; Regardless
to
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decrease, the United Kingdom kept its dominance during
all time
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, in Sweden
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of CO2 stood at around 8.3
tonnes
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and rose suddenly to above 10 and
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showed a dramatic fall of approximately 5
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,from 10.3 to roughly 5.3
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. From 1967 to 2007, the United Kingdom experienced a gradual reduction of approximately 2000 kg In 1967, Portugal's CO₂
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per person were around 1 tonne, noticeably lower than Italy's 4
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. Both countries saw an increase, with Portugal reaching approximately 6
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by 2007,
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Italy peaked at around 8
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in the late 1990s before declining to 7.5
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by 2007. Italy consistently had higher
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, but Portugal's growth rate was more noticeable over the period.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • CO2 emissions
  • per capita
  • decline
  • increase
  • trend
  • comparison
  • industrial growth
  • economic development
  • green energy
  • environmental policy
  • Kyoto Protocol
  • EU regulations
  • technological advancement
  • population growth
  • international agreements
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