You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events' organiser. Write a letter to the Training Organiser. In your letter • expressing your interest in the role • requesting more information about it • explaining what experience you have

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for the role of public events organiser on our one-month learning programme in the UK. I am very existed to grab

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opportunity and want to prove myself as a leading planner for the gathering shows.

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, it is going to be a first-time experience for me to manage overseas. For

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task, I request some basic information about the events.

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, what number of people we are expecting in coming programmes

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can able to make these successful with my prior planning. I

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got some experience in organising these affairs at the college level. I Led the recent best occasions that ever happened in my college with my dedication and teamwork. For

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, I would say kindly give me a chance to show my expertise. I will be very grateful to you. Yours Faithfully Rajpreet Singh

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greeting and closing

Ensure that your greeting is appropriate and includes a comma or colon, as well as correct formatting of the recipient's details if relevant.

suitable writing tone

Use more formal language and avoid phrases like 'I am very existed'. Instead, opt for 'I am very excited'.

complete response

Consider adding a concluding sentence summarizing your interest in the role and thanking the organiser for their consideration.

single idea per paragraph

Try to separate your ideas more clearly into distinct paragraphs. Each paragraph should ideally focus on a single main idea, making the text easier to follow.

positive

You expressed your enthusiasm for the role, which shows a positive attitude and eagerness.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

170 words

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Some people believe that there should be the death penalty for extremely serious crimes. Others believe that it is not morally correct to kill criminals. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, there are a large number of coffee shops and fast-food vendors on high streets and in town centers. Why are there so many of these outlets? What effect is this having on the society?