The diagram below shows the water cycle in both forested and urban areas. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the water cycle in both forested and urban areas. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows the water cycle in both forested and urban areas. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The supplied diagram
show
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shows
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the four stages of the
water
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cycle, one of these is in the forest and the other in urban territory.
Firstly
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, in forested
area
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areas
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this
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process
start
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starts
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with the precipitation,
then
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the
water
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goes down in the
subsoll
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subsoil
and runoff. Eventually, transpiration and evaporation
returns
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return
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water
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to the atmosphere,
in addition
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, the
cycles
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cycle
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starts again.
On the other hand
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, in urban
areas
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the drops take the land but only a small proportion of
water
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can go through the topsoil,
also
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, a
little
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small
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percetage
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percentage
of
water
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can return
the
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to the
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sky. In conclusion, we have the same situation in both
process
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processes
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but, in urban areas, the
water
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cannot to the atmosphere.
This
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,
make
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makes
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less precipitation year after year.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Precipitation
  • Absorption
  • Groundwater recharge
  • Evapotranspiration
  • Surface runoff
  • Impervious surfaces
  • Concrete
  • Asphalt
  • Stormwater systems
  • Vegetation
  • Water vapor
  • Local climate conditions
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