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children
spend more time on television and play online Use synonyms
game
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in video Linking Words
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,can become immune to violence and more inclined to act violently themselves. Use synonyms
Secondly
spending too much time playing video Linking Words
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can isolate Use synonyms
children
.
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statement is that it is not a secret most movies and computer Linking Words
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in which Use synonyms
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with great passion perform a lot of scenes of violence. Use synonyms
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to say after watching or playing Linking Words
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children
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as teenagers think that violence is a normal situation and apply cruelty Linking Words
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dealing with these groupmates,family members and other people.
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children
are spending a lot of time playing video Use synonyms
games
and others. Use synonyms
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can result in Linking Words
children
's social skills not developing well especially in making friends and communicating with others. These days many young people prefer to stay alone Use synonyms
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. Take my cousin as an example now he is 15 years old. He Linking Words
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fan of Add an article
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not have any friends.
In conclusion,Change the verb form
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i
firmly believe that playing too many Change the capitalization
I
games
isolates Use synonyms
children
because of the reasons discussed above Use synonyms
while
some people think differently,the evidence and arguments support my point of view.Linking Words