You recently bought an expensive electronic product from a store and found that the product does not work properly. Write a letter to store manager. In your letter, Complain about the problem Propose action for the store to take Request conformation that this is agreed

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Dear store manager, I am writing

this

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letter to tell you about the

macbook

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Macbook

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which

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bought from your store two days ago. I like the variety of products at

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store,

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however

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however,

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macbook

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Macbook

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is not working properly. Let me explain the condition of

MacBook

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the MacBook

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. When I press the button to turn it on, it is on for

few

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a few

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minutes but

turn

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turns

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off again. Not only

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, but when it is on,

then

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am facing

problem

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the problem

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of touch as well. I need to write every single word on

keyboard

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the keyboard

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, touch screen is not working. It's

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request that kindly return

this

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product or exchange it. I hope you will understand my situation and consider my request. Let me know if you want

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clarification related to

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product. Your's

faithfully

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, Navreet

kaur

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grammar

Ensure to capitalize the first letter of sentences and proper nouns (e.g., 'MacBook', 'It's').

content

Clarify the timeline of the problem to emphasize urgency (e.g., state how soon you expect a resolution).

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Consider adding a specific timeline for when you'd like a response or action to occur.

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You expressed your concerns clearly and provided a detailed description of the problems with the product.

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You maintained a polite tone, which is important in complaint letters.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

133 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

electronic product
malfunctioning
error message
disappointment
convenience
quality assurance
replacement
full refund
repair services
prompt confirmation
issue
resolution
customer service
complaint
store manager

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You recently bought an expensive electronic product from a store and found that the product does not work properly. Write a letter to store manager. In your letter, Complain about the problem Propose action for the store to take Request conformation that this is agreed

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