You have recently shifted to a new apartment, but there are some problems with the heating system. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter: •Describe the issue with the heating system •Explain how it is affecting you •Request the landlord to fix the problem as soon as possible

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Dear Mr. Herin, I hope you are doing well. I am writing

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letter to you regarding some issues with the heating system in my apartment which I recently arrived in. Undoubtedly, the apartment is new with great features.

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, I am facing a major problem regarding heater failure . After, several trials I am unable to get proper heat from it. I think there is a defect in the system. Currently, I am dealing with it and surviving with a compromise.

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weather is too cold with the harsh wind. And, I am unable to switch it on.

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, I am feeling cold and I can not

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it. I would really appreciate it if you could help me with my query

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So that I can take advantage of

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facility and feel comfortable. I look forward to from you soon Yours sincerely, Drashti Chotaliya

drashtichotaliya12Fri Apr 25 2025

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task achievement

Consider improving the description of the heating issue to provide more context and clarity.

coherence and cohesion

Try to ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single idea for clearer communication.

coherence and cohesion

Check for grammatical errors and awkward phrasing to enhance the overall quality of the letter.

suitable writing tone

You have a friendly and polite tone throughout the letter, which is appropriate for addressing a landlord.

complete response

You clearly articulate the impact of the heating issue on your comfort, which adds to your argument.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

148 words

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