You found a lost item at the park and want to return it. Write a letter to the park manager. Bullet points: Describe the item Say where and when you found it Ask how to return it to the owner

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Dear, Mr John I hope

this

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letter

find

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you well. I am writing

this

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letter

regarding

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to inform you about the lost item. My name is Mike, and I live

near by

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the park. I

use

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used

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to come

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this

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park every

mornig

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morning

for a walk

however

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, today

mornig

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morning

when I took the same route I found the camera near the

siting

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area and

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would like to return

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to you.

Moreover

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along with

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the device I

notice

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a small bag with

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apply

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documents inside it and I

can

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feel

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apply

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from the outside that it could be some personal

belonging

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inside of the bag. I did not open it,

although

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, I am

concern

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how

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about how

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to return it to the owner of the item. In

this

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letter

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letter,

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I am giving my address and my mobile number in

hope

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the hope

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that once the owner

will reach

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out to you, you will have my information. Yours Sincerely, Mike.

akhawar3Fri Apr 25 2025

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coherence and cohesion

Consider revising the greeting to remove the comma after 'Dear' and improve the salutation formality.

task achievement

Make sure to proofread for spelling and grammatical errors such as 'mornig' and 'siting'.

coherence and cohesion

Organize your details more clearly by separating the description of the camera and the bag into distinct sentences or paragraphs.

task achievement

The letter maintains a polite tone throughout, which is suitable for the context.

task achievement

You provided specific details about the lost item, which helps clarify the situation.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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5
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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
19
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

156 words

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You found a lost item at the park and want to return it. Write a letter to the park manager. Bullet points: Describe the item Say where and when you found it Ask how to return it to the owner

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant .

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Traditions are about the past and innovation is about the future, and it has been argued that we need to let go of traditions for the sake of progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?

You have a spare room in your Apartment that you would like to rent out to a student. Write a letter to your Student Accommodation Officer of local college and say 1. Where is your apartment located? 2. When will the room be available 3. What are the requirements for a student to stay?