The table below shows the minimum numbers of public holidays that companies are required to give their full-time workers in six countries in 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the minimum numbers of public holidays that companies are required to give their full-time workers in six countries in 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The table below shows the minimum numbers of public holidays that companies are required to give their full-time workers in six countries in 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The
given
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apply
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table chart depicts the number of public
holidays
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that
was
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were
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given by
companied
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companies
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for full-time
employee
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employees
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in six different
contries
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countries
in 2016.
Overall
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, The company in
Finland
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had
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paid
holidays
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for
employee's
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employees
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the highest among 6 different countries
while
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United
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the United
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States
had
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apply
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paid
lowest
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the lowest
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in
this
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categories
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category
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. To start off, the most number of vacation was paid by
company
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companies
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found in
Finland
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and Sweden, at 25
days
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. Followed by Australia at 20
days
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,
while
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Japan and
USA
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the USA
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just
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apply
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only paid 10
days
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and the lowest just only 5
days
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was China. As
the
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a
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result,
Finland
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had a total paid
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holidays
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holiday
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36
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of 36
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days
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. Though Less dramatic,
the
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is the
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total number of
entirely
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entire
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holidays
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by
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in
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Australia and Sweden. The former accounts for 30
days
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,
while
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the latter amounts
for
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to
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25
days
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. Followed by three different countries paid had just below 20
days
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.
In addition
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, for
public
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a public
the public
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holiday
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holidays
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, the company in 4 countries; Australia, China,
Finland
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, USA paid
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the indentical
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indentical
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identical
same approximately 10
days
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per year.
While
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Sweden and Japan would permit
to
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apply
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paid public
holiday
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holidays
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.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words holidays, finland, days with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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