The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990, 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the man features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990, 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the man features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990, 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the man features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table gives information about the annual
milk
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production
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in four different nations ( Netherlands, Australia, Tanzania and,
Guatemala
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) in 1990, 2000 and, 2010.
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, Netherland's
production
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was the highest among other
countries
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,
meanwhile
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Guatemala
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showed
least
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the least
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production
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to compare with others.
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with, the Netherlands showed the highest amount of
milk
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production
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with more than 11 million
litres
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among other
countries
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in all given years.
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number increased from 11,155,000
litres
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in 1990 to 11.466.000 in 2010. Australia was the highest nation in the
production
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of
milk
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with 11,246,000 in 1990,
however
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,
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number decreased gradually from 11,246,000 in 1990 to 9,165,000 in 2010. Moving on to the statistics of other
countries
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, Tanzania and
Guatemala
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witnessed a significant increase over the
30 years
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30-year
period. In Tanzania, the
milk
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production
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increased from 87,000
litres
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to 1,55,000 in 2010.
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Guatemala
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produced the least amount of
milk
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among the other
countries
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with 26,000
litres
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in 1990, it rose steadily and reached over half a million in 2010, and 84,000 in 2010.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words milk, production, guatemala, countries, litres with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "gives" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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