The graphs below show the percentage of men and women aged 60-64 who were employed in four counthies in 1970 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The chart bar above illustrates the percentage of

men

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and women aged 60-64 who were employed in four countries in 1970 and 2000. As

i

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can see, in the first graph

men

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that

hired

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were hired

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the most

was

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were

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in Japan either two periods,

accounted

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for 85% and 74%.

by

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the year 1970 The lowest employed

men

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was

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were

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in The USA

presented

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presenting

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for 73% ,

following

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76% in Australia,

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to The year of 2000, The lowest

men

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's employment was in Belgium approximately 19%,following by Australia was 47%. The second graph

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that the women were working similar rate in the three decades. in conclusion, working

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seems

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to

dropped

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in the

last

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decades but

women

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women's

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employment

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likely to

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fairy

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fairly

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steady

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between

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1970 and 2000.