The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart provided gives
illustration
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about
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of
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the amount of exported categories between 2015 and 2016,
while
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the table presents information about the comparison of each category in the same time frame given.
Overall
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, it is evident that there was not a significant change of stable trend for each four categories
between
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the period of time,
while
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Petroleum
products
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and Engineered goods
receiving
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received
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the most attention to be traded overseas, Agricultural and textiles
products
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are
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lagged behind.
To begin
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with,
the
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in the
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market abroad most income
were
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was
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coming from petroleum
products
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which began at $60
billions
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billion
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in 2015 and ended up just slightly above the number, similar
with
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to
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Engineered goods
just
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. The gems and jewellery received just above $40
billions
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billion
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in 2015, which slightly
decrease
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decreased
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below $40 in 2016. Agricultural
products
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remain constant, there was not a
changed
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at all , meanwhile in 2015, the export income of Textile
products
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stood at just above $20 and witnessed an increase to point of more than $30 billion in 2016. The tables
depicts
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information about the proportion of change in values from 2015 to 2016.
Surprsingly
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Surprisingly
, it shows that foreign outlays into
Textilles
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Textiles
product
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products
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, reached more than 15% from 2015. Gems and Jewellery received less attention which fell to
aroun
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around
5% the year after.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words products with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gives" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • exports
  • categories
  • percentage change
  • value
  • machinery
  • textiles
  • agricultural products
  • raw materials
  • increase
  • decrease
  • trend
  • sector
  • growth
  • decline
  • economic factors
  • market demand
  • trade policies
  • contribution
  • anomalies
  • unexpected findings
  • implications
  • economy
  • trade negotiations
  • export strategies
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